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    Citizenschallenge-v.3 replied to the topic looking for a beating, er help in the forum General Discussion 5 years, 3 months ago

    Okay, thank you, it makes sense.

    But you know I mean way more than that.  Though any grammatical corrections are always much appreciated.

    How does it flow?   What’s the impression it gives you?    Does it leave you clearly understanding what I’m thinking?  Is it coherent, rational?   Does it sell?   😉