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Dang Lausten, reworked it.  Got more consistence with mentioning dates and times.  Cleaned up a number of sentences.  It sounds better for sure, has a bit of that elusive cadence – and then I get to the end and smack 1044 wrd.

Frustrating since I had it down to 970, then hanging below 1000 – let down the guard for a moment, cadence and rhythm and thinking I nailed it,  then boom.  Instead of a dozen words to finesse out, it’s 4 dozen.  Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite.

You know I’ll check in again later on.    Good Providence will’n      😉