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TimB replied to the topic looking for a beating, er help in the forum General Discussion 5 years, 3 months ago
Take out that “manifesto” sentence, altogether. Replace it with “My personal mission statement is “____________________.” Make your mission statement short and accurate, like Coca Cola’s which is “Beat Pepsi”. Maybe “To confront the deceit of the climate change denial industry.” or something more accurate to you, maybe even more succinct.
Also, I imagine over the years, like me on this forum, have learned to pack what I want to convey into the most concise way possible. That is, edit out non-essential bits that don’t contribute overall in some important way. Maybe get your best draft together, wait a period of time and go thru it again.
This job/task/whatever it is, sounds like something you will be great at.



